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Beta Babe & The Justice Girls Comic Intro

Across the nations of our world,
From planets near and far,
In times future, past, and present
They share the same desire.

Protect the weak,
defend what’s right,
and treat mercy like a pearl.

For only this and nothing less can be a Justice Girl.


Prelude

Moving gently in a celestial dance 238,900 miles away, Luna, Earth’s Moon, stands guardian over her. Literally hundreds of bases called league halls fortify her landscape.

They began as a mark of a new heroic age – but soon became a vital resource in the war against Brainiac.

Together these heroes fight to restore mankind to her rightful place in the universe as a free developing planet reaching for the stars and beyond.

But Brainiac has other ideas - he has come to conquer, rule, and assimilate. Olara Ereonis Varu is the newest arrival come to join the fight against him.

Across billions of lightyears and time itself she has traveled to aid the Terrans. This is her story, and that of a very special league of heroes called The Justice Girls.




Chapter One - New Girl



Kahryzma: (Working hard on a teleporter system – looks over to Jade2643 and says)

“The next time I do something stupid like raise my hand when Super asks for experts in intergalactic travel you hit me with one of these wrenches.”

(Kahryzma holds up and shakes a sizable wrench in front of Jade2643)

Jade2643: “I don’t know why you are so upset – this isn’t so bad.”

Kahryzma: “Isn’t so bad. Are you kidding me? Here I am cleaning biodegraded goo off of teleporter coils when I should be out there kicking the cans of some of those villains or metal heads.”

Jade2643: “Well it isn’t like we will be doing this forever.”

Kahryzma: “We have been here for eight hours Jade – eight hours!”

Jade2643: “Yah but we are on the last teleporter – and halfway done with this one. We are in the homestretch.”

Kahryzma: “Can I check your Green Lantern card? Because the last time I remember we lanterns are supposed to be out there keeping space sectors safe – not performing house cleaning duties. Gah! This goo is horrible – I will have to shower for a week!”

(Kahryzma’s hands are covered in dead skin and biodegraded goo that has built up from a month of teleporter transport. She shakes her hands over the fill bucket mean to collect the gross bio waste.)

Jade2643: “Need this?” Jade offers Kahryzma a towel and some disinfecting sanitizer.

In the distance the sound of metal footsteps can be heard approaching. Kahryzma’s loud and carrying voice however muffle’s most of it.

Kahryma: (While cleaning her hands) “Be sure to also remind me to send a bouquet of roses and a thank you card to Iron Beauty.”

Jade2643: “Why would you say that?” Jade now looks up from her work to see Iron Beauty standing behind Kahryzma – who is still kneeling beside the teleporter coil with her back to her. Jade can tell Kahryzma is not aware Iron Beauty is there.

Kahryzma: “Because I have her to thank for this…this is HER JOB…and somehow she conned Super into having someone else do HER WORK.”

Jade2643: (Looking nervous) Jade starts to cough to try to break Kahryzma’s speech and gain awareness of her surroundings.

Kahryzma: (Totally oblivious) “I wouldn’t be surprised if she is working on some new toy – while we slave down here in the goo.”

Jade coughs louder and more violently trying to snap Kahryzma out from saying anything more that could get her into trouble.

Kahryzma: (Pauses for a moment and looks at Jade)

“That sounds really bad (looking concerned)…you should get that looked at…now…where was I? Oh yah, miss Iron Panties must clearly have her undies in a bundle cause…

(From Jade’s hand to Kahryzma’s head comes flying that same large wrench smacking her with considerable force.)

Kahryzma: “OOOWWWW! You hit me! What do you think your…”

(Jade2643 points behind Kahryzma to Iron Beauty)

Jade2643: “You said it! I tried to warn you.”

Kahryzma turns around to see Iron Beauty standing there. Immediately embarrassed, her face turns a very bright red.

Iron Beauty pops open her helmet revealing a stern look on her face as she says:

Iron Beauty: “Hello Kahr…how’s the project coming –almost done?”

Kahryzma: (Jumping Up) “Iron Beauty…I ah….saw you there…just having a little fun yah know….joking around. Wasn’t it funny?”

(Kahryzma laughs nervously - looks at Jade – and motions her to join laughing.)

Jade2643: (Jumps up also and is now laughing nervously along with Kahryzma) “Yes, Yes, on the last teleporter now, went fast really, no worries.”

Iron Beauty: (Now smiling) “Well great! I knew you two were right for the job (Iron Beauty gives Kahr and Jade a friendly slap to the shoulder). (Now looking at Kahryzma) Yah know Kahr, when I do this it takes me two days to complete the job.

I used the time this morning to improve our energy management system – but now - I will be free to recalibrate those environmental controls you been asking about for months.

Kahryzma: “Re-calibrated environmental controls….Really?”

Iron Beauty: “Really.”

Kahryzma: (Looking at Jade) “What are you waiting for Jade? Let’s knock this job out!”

Jade looks at Kahryzma and then at Iron Beauty. Iron Beauty throws back a quick sly wink at Jade and she shakes her head and smiles.

Kahryzma: (Now working again with renewed vigor) “What brings you down here Iron Beauty?”

Iron Beauty: “I am meeting a new girl for the league – Hal Jordan is her sponsor.”

Kahryzma & Jade: “Hal Jordan!”

Iron Beauty: “Yup. From what I hear she has already been to the Watch Tower and had a little chit chat with the big three.”

Kahryzma: “I don’t remember Wonder Woman mentioning this (now looking at Jade) do you remember Wonder Woman mentioning this?”

Jade2643: “No, and I am also surprised we have not heard about this. With Hal Jordan involved this is lantern business – and we are lanterns after all.”

Iron Beauty: “My understanding is Wonder Woman, Batman, and Superman want this under wraps for now. She needs a league and they decided we are the best choice.”

Kahryzma: “When are they supposed to arrive?”

Iron Beauty: “In 5 seconds”

Kahryzma: “ 5 seconds !?!”

Iron Beauty: (Starts walking to a teleporter and with calibrated precision arrives just as it energizes.)

“Hal Jordan, Olara Varu, welcome to the Paragon.”

Iron Beauty extends her hand in greeting and friendship as the two step off the teleporter.

Olara: “Thank you. You are most kind to meet us.” (Shakes her hand)

Hal Jordan: “Hello Beauty, nice to see you again.
(Shakes her hand)

Jade2643: “I’m Jade.” (Jade steps forward and shakes Olara and Hal’s hands) “Nice to meet you”

Hal Jordan: (Hal walks forward and extends his hand as he says) “It’s Kahryzma isn’t it?” (Looking at Kahryzma).

Kahryzma: (A bit surprised) “Why yes. My friends call me Kahr….I am flattered that you remember!”

(Kahryzma extends her hand but quickly realizes she still has bio goo on them, grabs a towel, and then shakes Hal’s hand.

Hal Jordan: “Hard at work I see!”

Kahryzma: “Well…a lanterns work is never done!”

Hal Jordan: “Isn’t that the truth – well keep up the good work.” (Hal smiles and Kahryzma blushes at the attention.)

Zatannaa: (Appearing out of nowhere and directing her question at Iron Beauty) “Who’s the new kid?” (Zatannaa looks over and nods in Olara’s direction)

Iron Beauty: “This is Olara Varu.”

Zatannaa: “What’s your story Varu?”

Olara: “Well I am not exactly sure what…”

Zatannaa: (Holding up her hand for Olara to stop)
“Hold that thought – just remembered – I have a raid to lead. Brainiac is causing more trouble and the girls and I are going to put a stop to it.”

Iron Beauty: “Need any help?”

Zatannaa: “Nah. I plan to role this one like a fine cigar.”

More Justice Girls now arrive and stand next to Zatannaa.

Zatannaa: “Girls why don’t you introduce yourself to MS. Varu here. Let her see what real Justice Girls look like.”

As the ladies step on the teleporter they introduce themselves and shake Olara’s hand. Olara smiles at each of them and tries to keep up with the introductions.

The first Justice Girl is a tall beautiful blonde wearing what looks like action sporting gear in the colors red, white, and blue.

American Dream: “Dream, American Dream – nice to meet yah.” Dream blows a huge bubble gum bubble and pops it as she steps up.
Following Dream is a much smaller but feisty looking Justice Girl with perky bright short red hair.

Red Solaria: “Red Solaria, for all your tanking needs!”
Red flexes revealing muscles upon muscles on her short petite frame and then jumps onto the teleporter.

Miss Terri: “I am Miss Terri and Sorcery is my game.”

Miss Terri is dressed in all white wearing a top hat, bowtie, and a casual magician’s outfit.

Olara: “Oh…sounds mysterious!.” Olara says smiling at Miss Terri.

Miss Terri: “The only mystery involved is how I manage to keep everyone up and healed from all the shenanigans they get themselves into.”

Olara and Miss Terri laugh together.

Now a powerful looking tall brunette approaches Olara.

ThunderGrace: “I command the powers of Thundar and Lighting. I am called ThunderGrace.” Grace activates her powers filling the room with electric energy which surrounds and swirls about everyone.

Olara: “I also have lightning powers – (Olara says to Grace) - we will talk later.” Olara winks and Grace winks back.

Next, a noble looking blonde dressed in knightly armor approaches.

Alyssa Goldenblade: “I am Alyssa Goldenblade, Lady of Justice of the Knights of Solamnia.”

Alyssa bows at the waist while placing her open right hand (representing the moon) over her left hand (formed in a fist – representing the sun) in a gentle manner and utters a phrase with reverence.

“Est Sularis Oth Mithas.”

Olara: (Bowing in respect at Alyssa) “That language sounds beautiful – what does it mean?”

Alyssa Goldenblade: “My honor is my life.”

Olara: (Touched by the sincerity in Alyssa’s voice) “Truly noble words to live by.”

Iron Beauty: “Alyssa is second in rank among the Knights of Solamnia and has been a Justice Girl for quite some time. Many have learned from her wisdom.”

Olara: (Smiling warmly at Alyssa) “I am sure I will be no different.” Alyssa smiles warmly back and then nods (as if to say – all right then) and proceeds to the teleporter.

Another armored maiden steps forward. Her armor is fashioned in earth tones and she is wearing a noble face guard denoting her status as a warrior.

Gravel Girl: “I am Gravel Girl. (Pointing to herself with her thumb) I am the one you want when it is time to get into a scrap! I like to take the edges off of the bad guys!”

Out of nowhere swirling rock and gravel appear around her like a huge grinding disk. Olara’s eyes widen as she watches the display.

Olara: “Remind me to be your friend!” Olara says with a sly look and a laugh.

Gravel Girl: “Don’t worries – I I I I I won’t let you forget!” Gravel says as she giggles and then jumps onto the teleporter.

Olara looks at the ladies, bows, and says – it is so very nice to meet you. Once Olara straightens she feels a tap on her shoulder from behind her.

Olara turns to see two intensely piercing eyes coming from yet another Justice girl with dark auburn hair and exotic blue tattoos.

She hands Olara an artistic business card which has beautifully crafted writing upon it. Olara looks at the upturned card which says “Hello There” then turns it over to read “Ambellina IV.”

Ambellina IV: “Hi, (giggles – then points at the card) that’s me.”

Olara looks up from the card into Ambellina’s eyes.

Olara: (Smiling) “So it is.”

Ambellina IV: “I can tell I am going to like yah.” (Taps her temple with her index finger) “I am in the know on these things. I’ll stop by and harass you laters.”

Olara: (Excited at many a new friend) “I will look forward to it.”

With introductions over Zatannaa now steps forward.

Zatannaa: “I’m Zatannaa. (Takes her hand and crosses it from left to right like she is painting an horizon.) A mystical maiden of might and magic.”

Olara: “Pleased to meet you.” Olara extends her hand to her again.

Zatannaa: (Not yet noticing Olara’s hand) “I am sure Hal has told you ALL ABOUT ME.”

Olara: “Hal has told me a little…and… I did see you at the watchtower helping some heroes.”

(Zatanna shoots Hal a look)

Hal Jordan: “It’s been really busy Z with Brainiac, league, and lantern business.”

Zatannaa: “Well…I suppose that makes sense.” Zatanna places her right hand on Olara’s shoulder and says “Allow me to correct Hal’s oversight. You see…..”


MEANWHILE IN THE MAIN HALL ABOVE


Three move as one, harmoniously performing complex Kata in a slow and delicate manner.

Arms, legs, and feet glide like a gentle breeze then burst into motion with blinding speed – only to return – to the same gentle breeze of this graceful dance.

It is into this calm that the enthusiastic and energetic Roxy Spaulding comes zooming into the main hall.

Roxy Spaulding: “Hey! Where’s the new kid? Have you three seen her yet?”

Roxy’s voice is loud and carries across the hall catching the attention of some other Justice Girls. Soon Roxy is joined by Indigo Dream, Bizower Girl, and Aegea.

Bizower Girl: “Bizower Girl HATES meeting new enemies. I hope she hates me. I am so confident when it is time to meet new enemies.”

Indigo Dream: “I know how you feel Bizzy. First impressions are so important. But I have a good feeling about this one – something different is in the air – I can smell it.”

Aegea: “Actually that is lunch – they are serving Lasagna and Garlic Toast.”

Bizower Girl: (Laughing) “Aegea is so serious – makes Bizower Girl cry so hard.”

A sudden gust of wind enters the hall from the teleporter chamber below. It moves quickly around the Justice Girls and comes to a stop in front of Indigo Dream.

A small spunky cowgirl dressed in various tones of browns and tans now stands before them.

Brandy TankTyke: “I just ran a recon…they are heading this way…Beauty is leading them up here.”

Aegea: “You mean the new girl?”

Brandy TankTyke: “Yes. Pixxies and Thinker Bell are asking her questions along the way – you know how they are – I caught her name – it is Olara. “

Captain Unohana: “Olara”

Sorceress Snow: “Ereonis”

PSIREN SONGG: “Varu”

Attention now turns back to the three maidens still performing kata. They appear calm, serine, and very much in the know.

Brandy TankTyke: “Hey! What gives? How do you already know so much?” Brandy scans the three waiting for a secret to be revealed.

From underneath the brim of a finely crafted straw hat comes a sly smile from the face of Captain Unohana.

Captain Unohana: “There is what is seen – and that which is unseen – all one needs to do is know where to look.”

Once Captain Unohana utters this line both Sorceress Snow and PSIREN SONGG join her in displaying a sly smile.

Before Brandy can ask another question.

Pixxies: “Oh…and your hair is so pretty!”

Thinker Bell: “I like the color!”

Pixxies: “Is it natural?”

Olara: (Giggeling) “Yes…it is natural.”

The new arrival and her escorts have arrived in the main hall. They are led by Iron Beauty while Pixxies and Thinker Bell fly about her asking random questions of curiosity. Introductions are made. Many more Justice Girls arrive and meet Olara. Quietly, patiently, the original three continue their kata waiting for their moment.

UNTIL

Snowbirds suddenly fly around Olara, a great psionic dragon rises from the floor of the main hall, and magical warriors appear out of thin air.

Olara is startled by this dramatic introduction and instinctively activates her power armor.

Captain Unohana: Holding up her hand “Apologies Olara…we only meant to get your attention.”

Olara deactivates her armor and stands down.

Olara: (Looking around) “Mission successful!”

Captain Unohana walks to Olara and places a mini katana (The size of a small letter opener) in her hand.

PSIREN SONG also advances and places a psionic stone in Olara’s other hand.

All attention now turns to Sorceress Snow whose snowbirds fly about her. Slowly she advances to Olara and says.

Sorceress Snow: “We have foreseen there will be a time of great peril when the Justice Girls will need you for their own survival.”

Sorceress Snow stops in front of Olara. The snow birds fly around both of them like a shield.

“You will be alone.”

Sorceress Snow reaches out her hand. One of the flying birds lands upon it – looks at her – and chirps happily. She speaks to the bird in a mystical language as cold air escapes her lips.

Sorceress Snow: (Talking to the Bird) “This is the one I spoke to you about. Protect her.”

The bird chirps back and then swiftly flies to Olara’s shoulder, landing there as if it where home.

Olara: (Overcome by the gift) “He’s beautiful!”

Sorceress Snow:
“She. In the trial to come you will need her – as EVERY Justice Girl will.


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Stay tuned for the next chapter….Timely Friends


Last edited by Beta Babe on Thu Jan 26, 2017 12:20 am; edited 2 times in total


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Nice intros for everyone!


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That right there was amazing, and love how you brought mine right in there at the start. Thanks.


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Another great story Beta, keep em coming Happy You are doing a great job at establishing the 'feel' of the world in takes place in Happy


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Good job Beta.
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